He left her in that old building and returned to his home. When he was going to sleep he thought that the next day he would return there and find the girl that wouldn't disappear from his mind.
The following day, he woke up and felt a little bit confused, he didn't know if the night before had happened or if it had only been a dream, a very strange dream. He ran to his living-room and looked for his jacket. It was in the usual place, on a chair close to the door. However there was something strange, his TV was turned on and it was on a News Channel that was talking about an awful car crash. This news caught his attention and he sat on the couch listening, when he heard that a girl had died and he saw her foto. It was the girl he saw last night on the road. He was shoked and more confused. He returned to that place and looked for that old building, however there wasn't any house, only a cemetry.
He left that place and returned to his house, he only wanted to try to convence him self that it had been all a dream.
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Congratulations! I think you've made a good job and I like your version of the story. It reminds me a TV series called "The Twilight Zone" because we never know what is going to happen and it is based on supernatural events. It is very interesting.
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Hi, I am a really fascinated person about the supernatural, the non-reality, the ficton. Those are my favorite kind of movies and stories. Nice peace of writting ;)
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Hi! In my opinion, you've written a good version of the story. This kind of stories appeal a lot to our imagination and our interpretation of events. I think you made a great job!
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